As you might know, I do some voice acting for the Folk Tale Audio Drama Anansi Storytime where I’ve been everything from a narrator, to (many) Goddesses, to a turtle. Plus, as a writer, looking for an agent, I’m dreaming of that day when people show up to listen to me read my own work (as terrifying as that is).
So, when I see panels on ‘reading your own work’ at conventions, I like to show up and see what else I can pick up. (See here)
Usually, they’re workshops. This year, at Balticon, the session was more of a panel, with a round or so of audience participation at the end. But I learned a LOT of things specific to reading your own work that I didn’t already know.
Here are my top 5 tips for reading from your own manuscript at an author reading.
1. Pick a scene with action, dialogue, and stop on a cliff-hanger
I’d always imagined that you needed to start your reading at the beginning of the book, otherwise you’d surely confuse the readers!
In truth – no matter how your novel actually starts though, when you’re reading for an audience, you want something active that isn’t too full of introspective!
Although, you still want the scene to focus on the main (or one of the main) protagonists.
So often, writers (and audiences) believe that since you wrote it, you should know your novel forwards and backward.
But, even if you aren’t a writer, can you remember a joke you made 3 months ago? With the exact wording? Probably not.
I promise it isn’t the marker of a ‘fake’ writer or someone who’s ‘not meant to do this’. Most authors practice.
After several read-throughs, you’ll get to know how many pages will typically take you to the 1-minute mark, the 5-minute mark, or the 20-minute mark, whichever length of reading you’re preparing for.
Make sure to give yourself a little extra script if you need to be sure to fill the time. Nerves and a live audience make most people speed up, no matter how much they’ve practiced.
Feel free to give an intro and talk about the book and yourself and the story — not telling the backstory — but selling yourself and the novel! You don’t have to just read your story during a reading.
3. Print it out and mark it up
A lot of authors print that scene out in the big font, so they don’t lose their place and mark it all up.
Put in pauses, when you raise your pitch, and when you lower your volume.
Highlight the different characters’ dialogue in different colors!
Whatever you need to make the reading more exciting to listen to.
4. Be EXPRESSIVE!
Use multiple voices! (Those ones you just highlighted in different colors)
Use over-exaggerated faces! (If you commit, so will your audience.)
E-nun-ci-ate! Make sure that you don’t turn your story into a mumble.
5. Don’t be afraid to EDIT THE SCENE
I was stunned and yet it seemed so obvious when they mentioned this tip. I’d always imagined half the audience having the scenes memorized and ready to ding you if you misspoke a single sentence. But that’s not who you’re reading to!
This audience wants you to succeed. They showed up ready to be entertained and to have the experience of the words being spoken by the writer. To have something fresh and new!
If you’ve ever been to a concert, which is more exciting? A set playlist where everything is by the books and they wait exactly 90 seconds of applause before coming out for the ‘surprise encore’. Or a band with a huge song list, picking and choosing which song they feel like tonight, with a more organic feel?
The audience is there for your take on it: the sound of foreshadowing in your voice, the excitement of the scene, the wrinkled nose in a character’s disgust at kiwi (what can I say, some characters have no taste!).
So make it easy for them to love your reading.
Cut the dialogue tags — especially if you’re using voices.
Do you have asides and mentions of side plots that aren’t relevant for this scene? CUT THEM!
Do you head-jump a lot and don’t have a full reading’s worth from one character’s point-of-view? Clip them together!
Make the scene as stand-alone as you can — except for that cliffhanger ending and leave ’em with your
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These notes were taken from the #Balticon52 panel “Reading Your Own Work”. The panelists were Dave Robison, Starla Huchton, Valerie J. Mikles, Steven Howell Wilson, and moderated by Erin Kazmark.
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