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Author: Morgan Hazelwood
#28 Query Corner: THE EYE BEGINS TO SEE
Welcome to:

Morgan’s Query Corner:
Fresh Eyes For Your Query Quandaries
PREDESTINED is a contemporary fantasy set in a magic school.
When Evie’s crush, Justin, offers to use his dark magic to help unlock her magic, she’s horrified. Now, the race is on for her to master her magic before the darkness consumes Justin.
Overall Impression:
PREDESTINED sounds like a solid magic school fantasy.
A couple of things to think about:
- The ‘clumsy’ girl is a bit of an overdone trope at this point. I’d skip using it in the query.
- Give details – keeping things vague show how you’re like your genre, details show how you’re different.
- Focus on the stakes more than world building.
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#27 Query Corner: PREDESTINED
Welcome to:

Morgan’s Query Corner:
Fresh Eyes For Your Query Quandaries
PREDESTINED is a contemporary fantasy set in a magic school.
When Evie’s crush, Justin, offers to use his dark magic to help unlock her magic, she’s horrified. Now, the race is on for her to master her magic before the darkness consumes Justin.
Overall Impression:
PREDESTINED sounds like a solid magic school fantasy.
A couple of things to think about:
- The ‘clumsy’ girl is a bit of an overdone trope at this point. I’d skip using it in the query.
- Give details – keeping things vague show how you’re like your genre, details show how you’re different.
- Focus on the stakes more than world building.
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